Blurry
by zprymantis@smilingwithteeth.com


I was about to snap her picture, and saw the glow. When I looked at my mom, she always seemed to have a fuzzy glow around her head. It was probably either that I had very poor vision, or I saw auras or something. She was beautiful, more beautiful than a mother should be, embarrassingly beautiful.

On parents visiting day that year, in the fifth grade, she had nudged her way to sit between Mrs. Wall and Mrs. Harvey at the back of the classroom. I heard the other kids whispering and wondering whose mother she was. I was both proud, and uncomfortable. She wouldn't have seemed out of place between June Cleaver and Laura Petri, but here in my fifth grade classroom, her tight woolen skirt, hose, high cheek bones, perfect posture and confident smile made me feel not quite worthy, or something.

She had been working hard before our vacation that summer to have her daughter cross over from clumsy childish girl to woman, and I guess I just wasn't ready. She had gone shopping with me in the weeks before, buying new spring outfits, and like girlfriends we picked out matching huarache sandals. I had been instructed to pack the new things until our vacation, to keep them nice until our trip, since I was notoriously hard on clothes. I was also hard on myself, with skinned knees, ragged fingernails and messy hair; I was oceans away from my mother's feminine perfection.

There we were, on vacation, in a fancy Niagara Falls hotel room. She had just taken my picture, as I sat posed at the desk pretending to write on the hotel stationary .

"You can show this picture to your friend, Charlene, she will be so jealous!" my mom said, as she snapped the picture. For that one moment, I was pretty, I was my mother's daughter.

Then it was her turn, and I lifted the camera and focused as she posed on the edge of the bed. I took the picture that lived in my wallet for years. She had that familiar glow about her, one hand on her hip, the other laying gently on her lap. Her waist thin, her posture perfect, her smile had that movie star quality, and I snapped the picture.

It was right after that picture snapped, a few moments later, that I spilled the ashtray. The dirty sooty contents landed in her open suitcase and I kneeled down to help, and ultimately made matters worse.

Her frustration with her daughter must have reached a peak at that moment, and I was quickly pulled across her lap. My mother's hard slaps to my thighs and bottom stung right through my skirt and though we had been more like girlfriends when picking out our sandals, it was definitely an angry mother who bent down to remove her shoe and lift up her daughter's skirt.

When the huarache sandal landed on my panty clad bottom, I could feel the edge of the small heel crack against my skin. I was a strong girl, not too small for my age, but I was no match for the anger that kept my mother's gripe tight around my waist and that shoe landing hard on my panties. Then she lowered them, exposing my reddened bottom, and I suppose that was when she reached for the hairbrush laying on the bed near her thigh. The hairbrush did it's job, filling in the blanks left by the sandal. My entire bottom glowed an angry red when my mother finally set me free.

I was gasping for breath, having been crying and kicking to struggle from her hold, and once I was free, flung myself exhausted on the bed and sobbed. My mom had a strange way of making things right again. She silently poked through her suitcase and removed the things that needed to be cleaned, and then unexpectedly spoke when she noticed her sandal's sole had cracked in half. "Look what you made me do!" she laughed.

I sat up and smiled back at her, forgiving her and myself, the blurry aura still around her, emphasized by my tears.




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